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« Reply #60 on Mar 4, 2007, 7:06pm »

well ou see what happens when you go to the hospital...........................you meet hot male nurses
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« Reply #61 on Apr 28, 2007, 1:00pm »

I've actually been meaning to post up some my Love poems, not telling you ho recent it was..because ..yeah so anyways..

Actress of Love
I played Cupid for you, you human messenger of love,I saw as you wooed her over, forgetting me, and letting me love on my own.
I played as a Psychiatrist, hearing all your problems, giving you solutions to win her back, forgetting me, and letting me to solve on my own.
I played as your Muse giving you idea to make her love you more, writing love poems to her,forgetting me and letting me write to myself.
I played as your Lawyer, defending you as she thought you didn't love her anymore, you won the case, forgetting me and letting me lose mine.
I played as the Police, helping you capture her heart, forgetting me, as you let my heart go to jail.
I played as the girl who helped you win her over, and watched your ups and downs in mild distaste, watching you win her over as you ignored me and my feelings, rejected me for her, I saw you loving someone else, I let you break me down.
Yet I am brave enough to say those three hardest words to you in pride, and then ashamed for letting you know.

That can't be Good
There is this feeling I get when I talk to you, it starts from the tips of my toes and up my legs.
There is this feeling I get from my legs and to my stomach every time I'm near you.
There is this feeling I get from my stomach and to my neck every time you touch me.
There is this feeling I get from my neck and to my cheeks every time you kiss me.
There is this feeling I get from my cheeks and to my head when you whisper 'I love you'.
I'm dizzy from your love, and I like the way you make me feel
<3

Have I Ever...?
Have I ever told you how right you make me feel?
How you make my problems go away by just being there?
How pretty you make me feel by just holding me close?
How perfect you make me feel by a simple kiss?
Do you know what effect you have on me?
I'll tell you now...

I Promised Myself
When my heart broke the first time, it was severely cracked.
I promised myself I wouldn't love.
When my heart broke the second time, it shattered.
I promised myself I wouldn't cry.
When my heart met you,
I promised myself you wouldn't hurt me.
My heart already comes broken,so you don't have to waste your time breaking it.
I won't lay awake at night thinking of you, and pretend it not my pillow, but you I'm lying with by my side.
I promised myself, I wouldn't love, cry or pine for someone else again.
</3

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There is something about you that I find compelling.
I'm not sure what it is, but I think its the way you talk to me as if I'm the only person there, or how you buy me things for no reason, or how you steal kisses from me leaving me breathless. Maybe its the way it feels so perfect when you hold me in your arms, and you whisper softly how much you think I'm beautiful, saying I love you...

Funny how we choose to believe those words...Because you can say I Love You and not mean it
</3

Sad lonely girls walking down depression lane not know love would come her way,not knowing pain was due one day.
Clueless aloof boy was being loved by sad lonely girl, she dropped him subtle hints, he picked all but none.
She thought of his daily, he was an enigma to her.
Sad lonely girl died within not knowing weather he loved. Sad lonely girl didn't confess, she kept walking depression lane.
Sad lonely girl didn't know love.
She could feel no more.
Love is the slowest form of suicide.

Goddess Hecate
The opalescent moon knows whats wrong.
She can see this lonely on who stands a little farther, who is a little quieter, who feels small inside.
Slowly she started to deteriorate into nothing more, and nothing less.
She wonders of his love, and grows weak inside, surrendering herself to the one-sided love relationship.
Something so impossible of their, or rather her love, so far, so different, there was none.
So very sad and depressed of his love.

Live for yourself
My family told me what I must do, what I must be, what I must say, but that was never me,I was just some puppet to correct your life's mistakes.
You confide all your worthless problems to me, setting the weight on me, going for everything little opportunity to break me down, I fix your life's mistakes.
There was that time when I was blamed for every little mistake, everything wrong that had happened, or is going to happen.
Don't make my life miserable enough than it already is.
Don't blame me is you were treated like shit.
Your life is a mistake.
I'm not your solution.

Emotions Are Taking Me Over
In the safe sanctity of my room, I cried a fucking river.
A smile fixated on my face, tears dried up like a mask of lines, as I am berated by the one I love.
The irony of what causes me to cry so easily, but I am strong.
I let my emotions flow, forever moving,
I am the river of which you live by.
I am a danger to you
There will be destruction
Rather a good river...
I'm a river of emotions,
Forever flowing.

Am no shutting up now LOL
And No, I Am Not Emo Shenkyuuverymuchness.
Yes..that is a real word...MY word ^^
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Don't try to possess him.
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Tom Felton Kicks Johnny Depps Ass >< Even thought both of theirs are sexy as hell... Tom's is better =D
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« Reply #62 on Jun 2, 2007, 3:15pm »

Gee, you guys are awesome writers. I almost got emotional when i read the most beautiful eyes, Luna.
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« Reply #63 on Jun 24, 2007, 1:16pm »

*cough cough*
Haha yeah...
I have no life...

I want to make my own website and just post up all my writing...Not sure if I'll do that ><
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Tom Felton Kicks Johnny Depps Ass >< Even thought both of theirs are sexy as hell... Tom's is better =D
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« Reply #64 on Jun 24, 2007, 4:03pm »


Quote:
*cough cough*
Haha yeah...
I have no life...

I want to make my own website and just post up all my writing...Not sure if I'll do that ><


I could help with this in the past few months I started to learn to write pure HTML. So i can help maintain it and snuff.

Anywho...l I suck at this but... meh.


I hesitate,
Unable to speak,
Unable to ask,
When you pass,
I remain frozen,
I Love You I say,
But you do not here,
For I am invisible,
Just another kid in the background,
Loved by no one,
Looked down upon by many,
But you stop,
You turn and look at me,
I Smile,
You Smile back,
And I know,
Maybe I do have a chance,
Maybe I don’t…
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« Reply #65 on Jun 24, 2007, 4:45pm »

Hot..Dayyuummm
Thats pretty good Leon, is it from personal experience?
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« Reply #66 on Jun 24, 2007, 5:40pm »

*nods* yup
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« Reply #67 on Jun 25, 2007, 10:54am »

Hehe, see Luna knows these things =]
personal experience poems are easy to do
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Tom Felton Kicks Johnny Depps Ass >< Even thought both of theirs are sexy as hell... Tom's is better =D
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« Reply #68 on Jun 29, 2007, 7:12pm »

Oh..I wrote two new stories...Which I have to find ><
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Loving him is just like to love the wind. You cannot hold it, cannot keep it.
Don't try to possess him.
Just fly with him.

Tom Felton Kicks Johnny Depps Ass >< Even thought both of theirs are sexy as hell... Tom's is better =D
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« Reply #69 on Jul 24, 2007, 8:24pm »

So I have a new poem that's very much unlike anything I've done mostly because it comes off as very self centered and full of bitterness..enjoy

The Pitter-Patter of the Rain

I’m the glistening of the moon hung for all the world to see,
The twinkling of the stars at night radiate because of me,
You hear me whisper with the wind,
And fly as eagles soar,
Knowing deep within your soul,
You’ll never see me any more.
I’m the shimmering of the snow on a clear winter’s day,
The bitter cold that chills the bones and never goes away,
The spring leaves that turn to amber,
And slowly burn to ash,
You used to have my heart and soul,
And fleeting kisses that abash.
I’m the daybreak that comes followed by heavy yawns,
The morning dew the glistens on the lawns,
The pitter-patter of the rain,
On a warm spring day,
I’m the one you’ll never keep,
The one that got away.
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« Reply #70 on Jul 24, 2007, 8:55pm »

Wow, I thought that was pretty damned good. This is like, the first time I've looked in here... for a while <.< Luna, I'll read your story like, tomorrow or something. I'm way too tired to do it now.
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« Reply #71 on Jul 25, 2007, 9:07am »

See, I wouldn't have noticed anyone posted in here without the colored names xD

And yeah, take your time, don't really care =P
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Don't try to possess him.
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Tom Felton Kicks Johnny Depps Ass >< Even thought both of theirs are sexy as hell... Tom's is better =D
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« Reply #72 on Aug 31, 2007, 5:17pm »

My heart would flip at the thought of you,
Cupid's bow shape lips would press me own
The blood burning heat of your skin against mine
Now I know its all been done with her...
I felt so used, abused, tossed around as nothing.
Feeling of love that was there, left with you
Your not here, I'm choking up inside
They say time heals everything,
I'll still be waiting
You can be safe in love,
As long as you keep rising...
You can never fall down
I've been over looked many times,
To the point where I'm used to it
I don't have the right to feel jealous when you say 'I Love You'
Cause it doesn't mean anything..
I've been pitied and played once more
Thats my story...


Don't question it...
Just accept it
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« Reply #73 on Sept 1, 2007, 5:09pm »

Don't question it...
Just accept it
I know I didn't follow the trend
That feeling which was so new to me
I've read about it,
Pictured it in my mind
Heard about...
It sounded so happy
But why was I so slow to understand?
To the point where I wanted to feel you against me...
The lovers embrace
Sparks of recognition...
Love...I was in 'love'
How badly I wanted to live thinking this feeling was unreal
How useless this feeling was
It was just a word
He, just a man
I the overlooked
The heartbreaker
The heartbroken
How real this feeling is...
Not how I read about it...
Pictured, or heard of...
I wonder of this love
Why does it end?
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« Reply #74 on Sept 14, 2007, 7:04pm »

I don't get too close to anyone...
I put a barrier around me,
So you'll never understand
One by one
They all leave...
I let you in... The first boy in a year
You left an impact on me
Love was for the weak,
I felt weak for trusting you, loving you,
I overlooked everything whenever you smile.
I let you in, now I want you out, speed the process up faster
Since everyone that was there left
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« Reply #75 on Sept 14, 2007, 7:22pm »

ah..and here's another I suppose..

Back in the past when your honeyed words would make everything seem okay.
You would whisper 'I Love You' in my ear
Warm breath moisted pleasurably.
Graze your fingers along my arm going up,
Catching my lips with your own,
Soft lips pressed gently against me.
I shudder helplessly against this hold.

Now in this presence,
Your yell and scream of what a disgrace I am, worthless and untouchable,
You spit in my face after every word,
I flinch inwardly,
Grasping my arm till purple and blue,
A strike so cruel
I'm nothing to you...
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« Reply #76 on Oct 10, 2007, 8:16am »

Hmm...I Contemplate on posting another story...Hmm
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« Reply #77 on Feb 22, 2008, 9:50am »

...Yeaaaaaaaaaah time to find the most beautiful eyes story I wrote some time back...
Also time to make that webstite/blog page I've been holding off.
Not that anyone is going to read my crap XD

I hate school ohso much right now. XD
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« Reply #78 on May 12, 2008, 10:48am »

Luna your poems are really cool.

I wish i could write something presentable
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